Is this good for the beginning of my book?

wow this is good but if your thinking of putting it as chapter one, don't, make it as a preface. Seriously this was so interesting it just got me hooked instantly, i just wanted to read on. Honestly put this up and continue it on wattapad.com or some website like that.

Help:/ girls only i need help girl help?

ok so i have had crushes on girls before normal **** to happen. but one day i was walking to class and i fell in love. i saw her and right at that moment i knew i loved her. and for the first time i am afraid to talk to a girl witch is her what can i do im afraid she would like idk not like me and my friends well 50/50 of them she is ugly and then other say shes hot but i cant see the ugliness or hotness in her im just i LOVE with her what can i do? help????

What is this amulet called??(link)?

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Runescape armour question??

get ur Attack , Strength, and Defence little higher and you can wear Zamorak, Guthix, and/or Saradomin Armour

Is this a good part of my story?? Interesting?

This is good for a start, very descriptive, but this isn't enough for me (or anyone else) to critique.

Is anyone else exhausted of modern life?

Modern life is ****, people go diranged because teh sit indoors all day, in front of sceens, eating unnatural foods and to top it off real folks find it hard to thrive. In the past if you were brave, fast and strong you survived and thrived, nowadays that same excellent human would have to submit to schooling and sit behind a desk or be a shitty security guard. Modern life is rapping the enviornment, which is very sad, and people seem detached from reality, themselves and there land,. I really dislike modern life, anyone else agree? What is yall's spin on the subject? PRIMITIVE RENEWAL!

Good yugioh deck? its just random cards...but im planning to buy more warrior and pyro type?

First things first, do not EVER buy single cards straight up.....you get ripped of. Always trade for the sh*t you need. Next, idk exactly what it is your trying to do here, but if you were to test this out against even a scrub, you'd get beat fast...just being honest. Listen: the best thing to do is have a theme. Pick an archtype(s) and stick with it/them...but i don't suggest mixing archetypes. And idk your knowledge of the game but i hope you know what an archetype is. It's a group, or family of monsters and support cards for those monsters that all work together and help eachother out (i.e. gravekeepers, frogs, lightsworns, six samurais/shiens, x-sabers etc.) So, if lets say you do want to make a deck of warriors...thats great! But, what KIND of warriors would you like? Will you build....Gemini? Samurai? Elemental Hero? You see, there are many different things you can do with your deck, but all cards must work towards the same purpose. You must set your purpose for and within your deck. Another great tip: NEVER run more than 40 cards. Never. And ALWAYS have your side deck packed to the ends with 15 great situation cards. Anyways, back to the deck. All Im saying is, clear the slate and start over. My advice would be to do reasearch on tier 1 decks and see why theyre great and why they win. I personally run gravekeepers as my main deck because I love the archetype, and love their theme (slow, somtimes fast control with great draw power and searching and destruction of cards, some hand advantage and/or field swarm). I hope my advice to you is taken in a way that will greatly impact your future games and strategies....Superb luck making decks and have fun out there :D